tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4776337855337523166.post2842529800812773644..comments2023-04-17T04:29:29.950-07:00Comments on Mary Quite Contrary: Chapter 12, Page 6 Guarding territoryBrigidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03796317915330760325noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4776337855337523166.post-24110291498630491522011-02-07T11:29:13.617-08:002011-02-07T11:29:13.617-08:00@Robert: That's okay. It's supposed to be ...@Robert: That's okay. It's supposed to be Dad having trouble getting to a working photocopier and then defending the one he finds. I was experimenting a bit with dialog-free storytelling. Looks like it needs some work.Brigidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03796317915330760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4776337855337523166.post-37465551989400943902011-02-07T09:13:44.916-08:002011-02-07T09:13:44.916-08:00Um... sorry to say this... it's a tad too abst...Um... sorry to say this... it's a tad too abstract. I'm not quite sure what is going on here. Maybe a thought balloon or the like? oO<br /><br />Rob H.Acacia H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07678539067303911329noreply@blogger.com