Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 15 Something terribly wrong

Store layout needs work.

I noticed in Walmart that the bras were very nearly touching the aisles for boys underwear and pajamas. Awkward doesn't begin to describe it.

Monday, November 9, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 14 Serious freaking.

Serious, yes, but maybe not that serious.

Well, at least Mary understands that there's a problem. A tad overly emotional about it, but she does have some understanding.

I had a lot of ideas for Mom's last line, but I think the 'oy' gets the idea across much more eloquently.

There may be some delay in the next episode as I work on some much needed computer cleaning and figure out just what the next episode is going to be. ^^;

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 13 Why that look?

Mom is not happy.

Mary is in trouble. Though perhaps she's suffered enough for her crime?

Monday, November 2, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 12 Panic under pressure

Mary doesn't take stress well.

There are people who perform wonders under pressure. There are those who approach problems with calm and poise.

Mary isn't one of those people.

Friday, October 30, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 11 Too quiet

Always worry when kids are quiet.

There are children in the house.

There is no noise.

Worry.

It's pretty amazing how often that progression works out.

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 10 Left behind

Conny wants to play.

This is not going to end well.

Monday, October 26, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 9 Queen of the castle

Definitely forgetting something.

Last Thursday was the 22nd. That's the 20th anniversary of Jacob Wetterling's kidnapping. I was six when that happened, so Mary wasn't born yet. My memories of the time are kinda vague, and I don't think I entirely understood what was going on, but I do remember finding the whole thing rather frightening.

Mary is about to have a similar experience. Just to let you know, I'd planned out this arch before finding out about the coinciding date. Really. Oh, and the following is based strictly on real events. (Being responsible is not fun.)