Wednesday, August 11, 2010

A delay

Sorry 'bout that.

I'm having a really hard time figuring out how to show the level of panic Mary feels behind the wheel. There are also a couple events coming up in story and in real life that are going to make things interesting for me. Uff da.

Anyway, I'm hoping the delay won't be long, but I wanted to give some warning, anyway.

Monday, August 9, 2010

Chapter 11, Page 16 With great power...

Mary seems to have pressure control issues.

So which has Mary frightened more? The van or her Dad? It might be equal portions of both, actually. Having that much power, that much potential for destruction, at your potential control is a rather uncomfortable feeling. At least for her.

Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Chapter 11, Page 15 Permit, sort of

Not quite a driving permit.

It's hard to write the way Mary (and by extension, I) really talk. Wall o' Text doesn't even begin to describe it.

That same difficulty may also explain why I haven't put Dad in the comic much.