Monday, November 30, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 16 Reminder

The boy is not a girl.

Yeah. Peter's bigger than the others were at that age. It makes a difference.

Sorry for the lack of updates lately. It might continue to be erratic until finals are over. I had hoped to get some of this dealt with over the Thanksgiving Break, but I ended up getting homework done instead. And not enough homework, at that. ~.~ Sigh.

Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 15 Something terribly wrong

Store layout needs work.

I noticed in Walmart that the bras were very nearly touching the aisles for boys underwear and pajamas. Awkward doesn't begin to describe it.

Monday, November 9, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 14 Serious freaking.

Serious, yes, but maybe not that serious.

Well, at least Mary understands that there's a problem. A tad overly emotional about it, but she does have some understanding.

I had a lot of ideas for Mom's last line, but I think the 'oy' gets the idea across much more eloquently.

There may be some delay in the next episode as I work on some much needed computer cleaning and figure out just what the next episode is going to be. ^^;

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 13 Why that look?

Mom is not happy.

Mary is in trouble. Though perhaps she's suffered enough for her crime?

Monday, November 2, 2009

Chapter 9, Page 12 Panic under pressure

Mary doesn't take stress well.

There are people who perform wonders under pressure. There are those who approach problems with calm and poise.

Mary isn't one of those people.